I learnt about writing a moment in time about a squirrel and a hawk using descriptive language.
I enjoyed watching the video because it was funny at the end when the squirrel looked out of the hole.
It was hard to choose either the squirrel or the hawk because they are both clever and funny.
It was easy to write the paragraph because you just need to write in the squirrel perspective or the hawk perspective.
Next time I will put lot's more of descriptive words and sentences.
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