The Amazing Awapuni School Fun Run
“Yippy” I yell as we jog onto the ruby field to find our mat to sit on for the day until it’s our turn to run
While we Wait we cheer on the little kids as they run as fast as there little legs can carry them. As the age groups go up so does the speed they are going so it’s harder to see who is who. Once it got to fast that we just did hand games, and watch a little bit more running because it was funny to watch people slip in the mud and get soaked in the slip ‘n’ slide.
Finally it was our turn and got up and went to the blue flag, then the hooter went and we stared running throw the first thing which was the powdery pant when we went throw some in my mouth, it was Disgusting it taste like raw chicken! That was the only bad part but the rest was fine, but my favourite part was the mud pit because it was shallow at first but suddenly got deep and I nearly going to fall over, but I just made it without falling over.
After the mud pit it was the slip ‘n’ slide my 2nd favourite thing on the course because it was very slippery and wet. I went and slid along way before I stopped, We finished around the green flag when the horn went and we had to stop.
We waited until it was the time for the big re-rely with teachers and parents and student leaders and intermediate kids. When the horn blow they started running hard out! When they got to the mud pit Mr Barclay dove into the mud pit he was covered in mud head to toe! In the end the intermediate kids won teachers came 2nd student leaders came 3rd.
We were learning about writing quality recounts so if some wants to know what you were doing over the holiday we would be able to answer them.
I found it easy to put my writing into paragraphs because I have been doing it for quite a long time.
I found it challenging to think of a quality sentence because they are hard to find in my opinion.
Next time I will make it more detailed so you can enjoy it more and give me more comments.
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