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I really love these simple descriptions. You have managed to paint a feeling! Especially as the "warm flames" have just been lit tonight and we are ready to curl up!
Kia ora Archie, I really liked your winter poetry and all your descriptive words.It might look better if you deleted all the words around the outside before you posted.
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I really love these simple descriptions. You have managed to paint a feeling! Especially as the "warm flames" have just been lit tonight and we are ready to curl up!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Archie,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your winter poetry and all your descriptive words.It might look better if you deleted all the words around the outside before you posted.
From Isabella
Great descriptive words! I feel cold just reading it. And I just sneezed.
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