Tuesday, August 13, 2019

magnet poetry

The hardest thing about this task was thinking about how I who'd put it in order.

The easiest thing about this task was putting it on my blog.

I like it do you?

3 comments:

  1. I really love these simple descriptions. You have managed to paint a feeling! Especially as the "warm flames" have just been lit tonight and we are ready to curl up!

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  2. Kia ora Archie,
    I really liked your winter poetry and all your descriptive words.It might look better if you deleted all the words around the outside before you posted.

    From Isabella

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  3. Great descriptive words! I feel cold just reading it. And I just sneezed.

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